I'm surprised Mike B hasn't already said this...
Posted: Dec 6th, '05, 17:00
Chris, darling, you seem to have been in a hurry to publish the December Tea Muse... I'm not usually picky, but there are a couple of little errors in your Best of 2005 article, and they kinda stick out.
First, in the blurb about Numi's display teas, you said of the packaging: "they come really cool specially designed dark mahogany bamboo cases," and I think you're missing a preposition in there somewhere...
The other one is in the part about the triniTEA. When you say "I was a bit weary" perhaps you did mean what you wrote, but from the context, I think you meant "wary."
I'm not trying to be a pest, but I just thought you might want to take a look at your article. Maybe I should be an English professor when I grow up, after all...
~teaspoon
First, in the blurb about Numi's display teas, you said of the packaging: "they come really cool specially designed dark mahogany bamboo cases," and I think you're missing a preposition in there somewhere...
The other one is in the part about the triniTEA. When you say "I was a bit weary" perhaps you did mean what you wrote, but from the context, I think you meant "wary."
I'm not trying to be a pest, but I just thought you might want to take a look at your article. Maybe I should be an English professor when I grow up, after all...
~teaspoon