It's a nice poem, Rabbit.
. Do you record any of your songs?
i write poetry sometimes, but none of it's good. Here's a poem i wrote a year ago that may be ok:
Falling, falling into light
from the darkness of the night.
What dreams may come or memories show
are for no one but him to know.
He lifts the chair before I tumble,
quietly watching as I fumble
my life away without meaning.
Now, silently I'm leaving.
Goodbye, adieu, oh sweet sorrow!
Maybe we'll meet again tomorrow
for without life and love's sweet breath,
I tumble into sweet, precious death.